Personal statement advice and example: computer science
We asked admissions tutors to share their dos and don’ts for writing a strong and engaging computer science personal statement. Here's what they told us...
- What computer science tutors are looking for
- What to include in your computer science statement
- What to avoid writing about in your personal statement
- How to write about engaging with the subject
- An example of how to write about computer science in your personal statement
What computer science tutors are looking for
What to include in your computer science statement
- A strong opening: explain succinctly where your enthusiasm for computer science comes from, and why – but avoid the temptation to begin with a potted history describing when you got your first computer!
- How you're engaged with the subject: do talk about what’s inspiring you or motivating you to study it, whether it’s a relevant book or news articles you’ve read, or maybe a bit of programming you've done.
- An understanding of what's involved: tutors love to read statements where your enthusiasm for the subject comes across, alongside a clear sense that you understand what computer science as a discipline is all about. Don't actually tell them what it is; they know that already. Show them that you know.
- Your personal goals: what are you hoping to achieve by studying this subject for the next three to four years?
- Show you're a team player: according to the engineering and computer science department at Durham University, 'try to write about how you work with others. Have you been part of a team or led a team? Have you had to organise something complex such as an event, a play or a football league?'.
Computer science personal statement pitfalls
- Not standing out: Professor Lowe from the University of Oxford says that lots of the personal statements he sees 'are similar, bland, impersonal and don’t stand out – so make it personal, specific and concrete'.
- Using clichés: avoid phrases such as 'computers are important in the modern world' or just saying 'I’m fascinated by artificial intelligence' without explaining why.
- Quoting Wikipedia: 'We already know what computer science is so we don’t need a Wikipedia definition. We’re interested in your understanding of it and your desire to learn', Robert Zimmer from Goldsmiths adds.
Engagement with the subjectAdmissions tutors at University of Portsmouth and University of Warwick both agreed that clichés like ‘I want to do computing because it’s the future’ or opening lines like ‘I got my first computer when I was three’ are a big turn-off.
However, they do like to see evidence of your most recent engagement with the subject, or something current that’s inspired you. In fact, the kind of statement that would really hit the mark would include your reflections on some or all of the following:
- a programme you wrote or side project you've been working on;
- an internship or some relevant work experience you did;
- how your studies or wider reading have boosted your understanding or sparked your curiosity;
- your opinions on a key topic such as data privacy;
- any extra-curricular interests that have given you relevant transferable skills;
- an area or module you're particularly looking forward to studying.
Example of how to write about computer science in your personal statement
We know writing your personal statement can be tricky, so we teamed up with careers adviser Cerys Evans to create the following example for you to draw inspiration from.
For more personal statement advice and examples, see our articles on how to write a personal statement, 10 things to include and our video tips from tutors (featuring a computer science professor from the University of Warwick...). You can also compare computer science courses here.